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there are thorns stuck in this carpet
and clinging to my feet.
though i'm cleaning out,
you're burning my horizons.
it may sting to let you go,
but i can't keep fire-walking,
can't keep not breathing,
can't keep singing to myself.
so light-hearted when my heart is breaking...
you'll have to forgive me
because i'm still learning
what i'll only learn from you.
you'll have to stop me
when i start needing
because i don't think you need me too.
you'd think that after saying your name,
i'd know where to begin.
i don't want to play this game
if you're never going to let me win.
do you see what we're about now?
winning and losing...
i think we're too far gone.
but you don't seem to mind.
you'll have to believe me
when i say i'm sorry
because i'm choking on the truth
and please try to understand me
and come a little closer
because i really am alone.
how can i love you when all you do is bury me in maybes and half-hearted truths?
how can you love me when all you can say in response is "i'll get back to you"?
i think you should leave me
because i'm sick of learning
by writing with my own blood.
i know it will hurt me
but i know better
that it hurts a little less than you.
and clinging to my feet.
though i'm cleaning out,
you're burning my horizons.
it may sting to let you go,
but i can't keep fire-walking,
can't keep not breathing,
can't keep singing to myself.
so light-hearted when my heart is breaking...
you'll have to forgive me
because i'm still learning
what i'll only learn from you.
you'll have to stop me
when i start needing
because i don't think you need me too.
you'd think that after saying your name,
i'd know where to begin.
i don't want to play this game
if you're never going to let me win.
do you see what we're about now?
winning and losing...
i think we're too far gone.
but you don't seem to mind.
you'll have to believe me
when i say i'm sorry
because i'm choking on the truth
and please try to understand me
and come a little closer
because i really am alone.
how can i love you when all you do is bury me in maybes and half-hearted truths?
how can you love me when all you can say in response is "i'll get back to you"?
i think you should leave me
because i'm sick of learning
by writing with my own blood.
i know it will hurt me
but i know better
that it hurts a little less than you.
Literature
Discern
I can take
a hint without
taking offense,
without affecting
my sense of self,
but it's so hard
to tell who is real.
-Brian Shuffett
July 24th, 2010
Literature
precognizant memories
origami hearts
folded until the crane
is all we can observe.
you remind me of a girl
who died in a car crash.
she was from the neighborhood
and had big, dark eyes.
but she is gone, like cookies
left too long to cool,
stolen away in regret.
you remind me of a woman
who had to rebuild herself.
recovering from a brutal rape,
she wrapped herself in artifice
until she was healed enough
to trust again and found
she was stronger for her scars.
you remind me of a woman
so fogged by drugs and drama.
trading her body for the next high.
stealing from her mother.
bartering tomorrow for the moment
until someone sacrificed enough
th
Literature
Strum My Soul
You don't know what your words mean to me,
Coming from your lips they gently strum my soul,
Make it bathe in graceful serenity and pure ecstasy,
You take my soul to heights it has never reached before.
Nonetheless, my dear, you are there and I am here,
It is cold and snowy there and warm and barren here,
You watch the sunset there when I watch the sunrise here,
Yet I go to sleep every night thinking of your silky smooth skin.
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here's one in return for the many you left me with.
why the fuck am i still writing about you.
why the fuck am i still writing about you.
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Your imagery rocks. You have sentences that knock the air out of my longs...
Like
it may sting to let you go,
but i can't keep fire-walking,
can't keep not breathing,
can't keep singing to myself.
or
you'll have to believe me
when i say i'm sorry
because i'm choking on the truth
and please try to understand me
and come a little closer
because i really am alone.
or
i think you should leave me
because i'm sick of learning
by writing with my own blood.
i know it will hurt me
but i know better
that it hurts a little less than you.
That last stanza... Wow.
Like
it may sting to let you go,
but i can't keep fire-walking,
can't keep not breathing,
can't keep singing to myself.
or
you'll have to believe me
when i say i'm sorry
because i'm choking on the truth
and please try to understand me
and come a little closer
because i really am alone.
or
i think you should leave me
because i'm sick of learning
by writing with my own blood.
i know it will hurt me
but i know better
that it hurts a little less than you.
That last stanza... Wow.